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Last October, I was hit by a bunny. It resulted in a lot of scribbles on the back of papers at work and promises to myself that I'd work on it. But it sat around for a long time, until [Bad username or site: @ livejournal.com] announced her Understand I'm Satisfied challenge. I found a lyric that I liked and that year-old bunny.

Although it's late, I finally finished it. And I'm quite proud of it, too.




Inhaling Every Breath - Lance comes home

"It’s been a long time since I’ve seen you. Or anyone.”

“Well, you’ve been busy, right? Like, you’re a real cosmonaut now, huh?” Justin finally turned around, a glass in each hand. He sat on the bed next to Lance and passed him one of the drinks.

“Yeah, something like that,” Lance said, downing his drink in one gulp.





Thank you to [Bad username or site: @ livejournal.com] and [Bad username or site: @ livejournal.com] for holding my hand. And to [Bad username or site: @ livejournal.com] for the beta. :)

Date: 2003-07-09 12:41 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sweetchacha.livejournal.com
What a wonderful story! And I especially love the last line.

Date: 2003-07-16 10:19 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] milo6456.livejournal.com
Thank you! I'm sorry it took me so long to reply to your comment, but I really appreciate your feedback. The last line was interesting because it came to me when I was still a few pages from finishing the story and I didn't know how it ended. I'm glad you liked it. :)

Date: 2003-07-09 08:14 pm (UTC)
adelate: (Happy Goobers!Basez from Kaycee)
From: [personal profile] adelate
Yay! You posted! :D

Date: 2004-07-30 07:02 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lincolnkw.livejournal.com
what was I doing that I missed this?

Bleak, painful yet hopeful at the end.

Kudos!

July 2003

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